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Wound In Black Ribbon

Black ribbons and white lace
Decaying buildings ripe with moss
Slowly overtaking crumbling cities
Where violet clouds melt off the sky
And the streets are paved with skulls

Orange rust creeps along the alleys
Streaked with dirty water
As the city's masque slips
Revealing charred flesh and glazed eyes
The sky vomits rain upon them
The unfortunate labourers

Withering to heights never imagined before
Dusty ballroom floors imprinted with ghostly feet
Ceilings crack like the Ripper's smile
Chandeliers come crashing down
As though the hand of God is in the midst of judgement
The surroundings shake
And then there is nothing
©2006-2009 ~Tesko-Suicide
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Submitted: September 29, 2006
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YES, I am finally taking a break from the death/necrophelia thing I've got going on lately.
Though this piece isn't cheerful by any means, it's a step up don't you think?
(( It's all the damn Victorian junk I'm doing in English. >__>; ))
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expressive, and very nicely written.
Oh, wow.I love this =D Its tres sexy.
"The sky vomits rain upon them"
XD Nicely put. Seriously haha

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Woah this is good or woah this makes me want to gouge my eyes out? XD
Very well written, "Ceilings crack like the Ripper's smile," I won't forget that line for a long while. Keep it up! :)
"Ceilings crack like the Ripper's smile"
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"One day, Mr. Harper will get hit by a car, and I will be a happier person."
whoah this good, if it made me want to gouge my eyes out, then i would have done so therefore not been able to see the keyboard and type waoh? :p hehe anyway.......

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